Sunday, September 19, 2010

Crafting Writers 1-6: helpful reminders and new inspiration

The first six chapters in Crafting Writers K-6 by Elizabeth Hale are the exact reason I find teaching writing so exciting!  I attended a workshop in the summer of 2009 taught by Lester Laminack, a friend and colleague of Katie Wood Ray.  I had been teaching for three years and LOVED teaching Reader’s Workshop, but didn’t have a lot of passion for Writer’s Workshop.  I was there to get some inspiration.  I loved reading about writing and had read many books by Ralph Fletcher, Katie Wood Ray, and Georgia Heard.  My main problem was that I REALLY don’t like to write and the small noticings about writing that Hale talks about in Chapter 3 were not things that I noticed when analyzing writing. 
That week Lester reintroduced me to the idea of writer’s craft and it allowed me to find a love of teaching writing that I had not possessed before.  Two points that I enjoyed reading were, ‘reading like a writer’ and ‘crafting with punctuation’.  Since I love to read (especially children’s picture books), the section about ‘reading like a writer’ really resonated with me.  I like the process that Hale suggests for this strategy; recognize the small part à name it à say why it is good (2008, pg. 27).  I agree that it is often easy to identify writing that you (or a student) think is good, but identifying why is the hard part.  I can see myself using this strategy in my classroom.  This strategy connects so well to Hale’s example about speaking in Italian on page 15.  Often children’s book writers, Hale mentions Patricia Polacco and I would add Lester Laminack, have a lyrical and warm way of writing that children enjoy but do not naturally imitate. If our end goal in reader’s and writer’s workshop is to produce knowledgeable, creative, and thought-provoking readers and authors, making this connection between reading and writing seems crucial.
Hale’s chapter on crafting with punctuation is a wonderful resource.  I say “resource” because it is broken down in a way to really guide teachers through the possibilities of this idea…which is genius.  Grammar has always seemed so silly to me because it has traditionally been taught so completely out of context that remembering all of those rules, to my brain at least, is impossible.  Thinking of punctuation as a tool to achieve something in your writing has so much context!  I like to tell my students that the punctuation marks they leave in their writing are like road signs for their readers; they tell how you intend the story to be read.  In reading conferences it is fun to read students’ writing back to them to check if it sounds as they intend.  If not, there is punctuation work left to be done.    
Having taught third and fourth grade for the last three years, the aforementioned topics are the ones that I found the most exciting and connected to.  Chapter 6, however, answered my current need.  I have recently moved to a kindergarten teaching position and have been a little lost as to how to transfer my new love of crafting to my little emergent readers and writers.  How so you teach writer’s craft to a five year old who can’t write?  It is a question I have spent a lot of time thinking about.  I am happy to announce that our first unit of writing was focused on drawing skills and we will now be revisiting that unit and using some of Hale’s helpful tables and suggestions before we begin personal narratives in November!  This is really the chapter that helped me connect what I know and love about the teaching of writer’s workshop to my very young writers.

6 comments:

  1. Absolutely, the drawing is so important. I went to an interesting session on writing at a conference last year. The presenter said that her research has proven to her the importance of keeping up with the illustrating even after kids are writing paragraphs. She says whether they illustrate before they write or after, it helps them to write, as she called it, "more fully." Maybe they are better able to hold ideas in their heads as pictures rather than words. After all, younger children only think in pictures and a picture contains a lot more information than words.

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  2. Emily, I loved what you wrote about punctuation, and I completely agree! Punctuation and grammar have always appeared as sort of add-on lessons at the end of a term throughout my schooling career. Even in language arts in middle school, we would have one or two days a grading period devoted to grammar. However, grammar is just as much a part of craft as writing rich, descriptive sentences. What if teachers incorporated an aspect of grammar into every writing lesson so that students could see it as a part of writing, not as a separate category of language? If students appreciate grammar and understand how it aids them in becoming stronger writers, I think the craft of writing could be greatly improved.

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  3. I also found chapter 6 to be the most resourceful for my current situation.

    As I'm always on the lookout for recommended authors, I'm glad that you mentioned Lester. I will definitely check the writings and let you know what I think.

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  4. In reading about your experiences and your concerns about your "little emergent readers and writers", I can't help being excited for you. When I was taking classes in California a few years back, I also volunteered a nearby elementary school. For two years I was playground monitor and story teller. Children were encouraged to answer "What if ...?" questions related to the story. Their alternate endings were accompanied by drawings to tell their version of the stories we read, many of which included letters, word and names. What fun. Hale's Drawing Stategies remind me that children have vivid imaginations looking for an opportunity to find expression.

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  5. Emily,
    I like your idea of reading the student's writing back to them to see if their punctuation is correct, what a great way to help the students learn and understand rather than just making a mark on their paper.
    Looking forward to your thoughts and ideas as we go about our class this semester.

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  6. I want to hear more about what you're doing with your kindergarteners! I would imagine you could develop a whole new set of "craft" suggestions, ones that likely are predecessors to the ones Hale writes about.

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